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  • on Frozen Paradise by Kiddy, on February 2, 2008
    YES!
    "the first ever sin you committed then later blessed us with the regained heaven."
    great imagery and reference
    you have done very very well with this poe

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  • on Me by Dun, on February 2, 2008
    i love "my dialogue unspoken/my silence unbroken/i watch behing irony's eyes/and smile at the world/all egos unfurled/and fly mine half-mast/lest it rip" wow beautiful words, truly well written
    i feel a lot of honesty behind the

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