- Last seen on Aug 30 4:04 PM 2007. Member since August 8, 2005.
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on A Legend by , on August 20, 2005
wow I love it
It captures the readers attention but you should count the syllables. Line 12 is the only line that’s missing up the flow. I love it very very deep. Please critique mine thanks. Rewarded 4
REALLY GOOD
I love it very creative. I like the last ending to it. the second line i didn’t like. It didn’t make sense but hte poem itself i love.. Rewarded 1