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  • skipeople : Welcome to SP! on June 10, 2008
    Glad to chat, help, or be ignored. Which ever may flip your pancakes!

    Ashley =]

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  • on Tangled by ObviouslyFineArt, on July 12, 2008
    The last line surprised me. I like the poem, I think because of the final line. It really makes the poem.

  • on I want to . . . by skipeople, on June 18, 2008
    "I want to know who I really am without feeling like it is wrong." I like that. I can relate to this. It has that pre-teen sentiment I think most of us have felt before.