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So I am 19 and this is my freshmen year in college. I have been writing poetry for a long time now. It seems like forever but obviously this could not be true since I am only 18 so logically even if I was like a super genius baby I have probably been writing poetry for no more than 17 years. Was I a super genius baby? That is for you to try and figure out.

Okay well let me see what do I like to do... Oh I love talking politics and being very casual about everything from my poems to my talking to my... telling people about myself. Anyways, I also love to read and often stuff I read is an inspiration to what I write (gasp who would have ever guessed!) I love and mean love food and just talking to people even when they can't talk back. I love captive audiences. Muahaha! Or ummm *cough cough* I like it when people want to listen to me.

What do I dislike... I dislike what I dislike and that is, idiots(like the retarded kind who are like hey I farted ha ha GARH!!), onions since I am allergic(though I guess technically I am alergic to eggs and asapragus too but I can handle those better), stale popcorn, and ... hmmmm I know there is something I am missing oh yeah 10 page papers assigned by my bible teacher. -_-

So this is me and that is about it I am a very extroverted person and am very quirky. So I hope you all enjoy my poems and have a wonderful day! Or not the choice is yours.

Want to talk to me add me on msn or facebook. My hotmail address is bj2_0@Hotmail.com I love to talk so please add me, I am frequently on MSN.

  • Member since October 22, 2008.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Did not eat an entire pumpkin pie.".
  • I am a 18 year old guy from Washington (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a full time student woot!.
  • I am in the groups All Hail Free Verse
  • I have 96 comments, 64 archived poems

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  • Truthful Sinner on June 2, 2009
    hello how is it going?
  • Birdie Stringfellow : Glad to meet you, BJ on February 26, 2009
    I am looking forward to reading your poetry after having just stumbled across one of your poems, The Two Choices. It was more than wonderful! I would say welcome to SharePoetry but you've been here longer than I have, so I'll just say, glad to meet you.
    Later,
    Birdie
  • Miss O Malley on January 12, 2009
    Hey! you sound cool. i was looking at some of my poems to decide which one to send off to competition and looked at Abortion. I must have forgotten that you wrote a comment about it. WEll, thanks. cuz that MIGHT be the one i send. i'm undecided.
  • Brian Balzer : Hello BJ Colvin on October 26, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to ask. I'm happy to help when I can. Take care.
    Read ya 'round,
    BKB

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  • on A Moonlight Trail by The Distant Unknown, on October 28, 2009
    This poem just has a way of convincing you mainly through the last stanza that this girl who was bound was real. I do not know how to explain it other than I want to go out there and sit and wait to see her after reading this poem. I think it is just the way the words seem to dance along with her. I must just be getting crazy in my old age though. Great read! ^^ (and yes I am only 19 but I still feel old)

  • on A New Sunrise by The Distant Unknown, on October 28, 2009
    I really relate to this poem having finally been able to get over the pain of my last serious girlfriend. I like the short lines that give the poem the feel that it is true. That the ties really have been cut by the short lines sharp as the blade of a knife. The only thing I think needs any rethinking might be the end of the second to last stanza. It might just be how I am reading it but it seems to break rhythm that the rest of the poem had. Other than that it was a great read