I am Molly and I am 17 years young. I love my boyfriend of almost a year so much.
- Last seen on Apr 27 8:22 PM 2008. Member since October 22, 2006.
- I am a woman from Oregon (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a full time student and a part time lover.
- I have 11 comments, 21 archived poems
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on So what have you been up to all these years? by dave ochs, on January 26, 2008I love how this penned such a beautiful story of life and the experiences that go along with it. I promise you if you work at it you can probably duplicate something like this.
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idon't= I don't
im=I'm
I think also cruel is too common of a word.
i=I
i'll= I'll
Other then that, I just thnk you should try using less common words overall.
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