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Bluebird

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  • Last seen on Nov 26 11:29 PM. Member since August 6, 2005.
  • I am a woman from Oregon (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a galley wench..
  • I have 92 comments, 5 archived poems

My Poetry

  • The month closes down upon itself / redeeming everything else / simply by being over / / Safety stomps straight into danger / accompanied by righteous anger / / One dimly lit soft step / one blackened spite confessed / territory renown
    64 words, 6 comments, January 13

My other items

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  • My October at allpoetry
    Tragedy repaired
    reborn
  • Another at allpoetry
    How to be so happy,
    content, alive.
  • It Wasn't Me at allpoetry
    I have reached some age, some place / where wisdom groans with disgrace / where certainty loses space / heroes crowned are soon replaced. / Late at night I scrape, I scrawl / friend and fool alike will fal

Guest Book

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  • MissKeller : changeofheart on May 17
    i reallllly like the change of heart poem...the emotion, the voice it has,everything! it's a poem a could someone could use when they have trouble saying what they really want to(like me)..2 King King thumbs up!!

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  • on Write me by Windhover, on November 9

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    " Since we're so far apart" even though we live together... guess I read a lot into your words. I think you meant that to be. Excellent in every way: the pace is intriguing, the words evocative, the open ending is perfect. Bluebird

  • on Thorn-Blower. by gnosisonG, on October 3
    The depth will require many readings... which is what " a mere shadow cast upon utter darkness" will need to extract total and true meaning. This is one of the few that is worth the time and thought. Bluebird

    . Rewarded 4