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I laugh much more
and much louder than everyone else
so they dont see how I really feel
I always get told I laugh at everything
so I laugh at that too
but really I just want to break down
and cry

My nickname is bambi becuase I'm so clumbsy
But my parents named me Hollie

I'm [fourteen] years old
Life isnt too great for me now
But I'm trying to survive
[trying being the operative word]


I'm B r o k e n
Not x..innocent..x in the slightest
But I'll be your doe/eyed/deer
and worship the (ground) you walk on
as long as you {promise}
you'll at least P.r.e.t.e.n.d
to {love} me

  • Last seen on Dec 2 11:29 AM 2008. Member since October 10, 2008.
  • I am a 14 year old girl (Great Britain)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm doing something else.
  • Visit my homepage at allpoetry.com/Broken%20Bambi
  • I have 2 comments

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  • Brian Balzer : Hello Broken Bambi on November 30, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. I didn't realize you had a page here also or I would have signed you gook much sooner. I have met many people out here. Some are very special to me. You are one of those special to me. You are a wonderful person. You will always be in my heart. I will always be willing to talk to you whenever you'd like.
    Love
    your friend,
    Brian

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  • on Unconditional by Brian Balzer, on November 30, 2008
    awuh this is very sweet. thankyou for the link. I am very thankful to have met you
    this is great

  • on Strong Emotions by Brian Balzer, on October 10, 2008
    I can relate to this, alot of thinds get me off, songs, films, books ect and most of the time I don't even know why I'm crying. Also if someone else crys, it makes me cry.

    I like the rhyming

    nice write