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Burning Blue

I'm a very nice girl with a love for all that is good and beautiful in the world. I look for the bright side of everything, and use any negative energy I have to fuel me toward positive outcomes. Hence, some of my depressing writing. If you'd like to learn more, please feel free to visit my MySpace page. It's a very accurate reflection of who I am and what I'm all about.

  • Last seen on Jan 12 6:53 PM 2007. Member since November 17, 2006.
  • I am a 22 year old woman from Michigan (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm working as a Childcare Provider at a nearby elementary school, going to college to be a preschool teacher and open my own learning center, or talking to "Hollowman," the sweetest man alive. <3.
  • Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/xburningxbluex
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  • on Can I Be Honest? by Saturnine Serenity, on December 18, 2006

    Love it!

    This is absolutely fantastic! And no, I wouldn't change it at all if I were you. I love the way you have it arranged. It almost seems more personal this way.

    I also love how easily I relate to this piece.I know you mention that nothing about it is comprehensible, but I think I disagree. I could be wrong with the thoughts and feelings I gather from this but, "Oh, my goodness" have I felt the same way!

    This relates a sense of, "I am what I am whether you or I like it or not," and I absolutely love that. It's so very real and honest.

    I want you to know that I am dreadfuly sorry I didn't come up with this one on my own. I'd have sent it to a couple ex's myself.

    Brilliant work.

  • on One Night by Malteaser, on December 18, 2006

    Impressive

    For five minutes of writing time, this is really quite good! I really like the imagery I get from this piece. It plays in my mind like a movie whether I try to allow it or not. Great job.