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  • Night and the dreams
    Dreaming in the night, Working in the day. Oh! My dreams take me away Dreams are the facts They never get betrayed They ought to be fulfilled, They never get delayed Work out your self whole in the day Gav
    89 words, 19 comments, August 20, 2006

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  • Don't Mind
    If the life is to think! I say its not, even when I am thinking over it just to answer this question / / Musing my own mind / / Playing with the words / / Words to make a poem / / Poem to rhyme the words / / Words to make sense
    130 words, 18 comments, October 29, 2005
  • Truth and lie
    With the endless defeat / / With the broken feet / / I stand tall / / Against the wall / / Who let me down? / / Who can you???? / / I say I win. / / I win the moment I loose / / I loose the moment / / I m
    137 words, 1 comment, October 29, 2005

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  • on An Emotional Con by marcusmoore, on July 16

    read it two times

    ur reply made me read ths poem again...n ths time i read it for gettng u more clear.hey i dont commnet for points..i comment in a straight way...n words r harsh(98.9%) as u mentioned..see i commented as a casual poem reader wud comment.....it help poets to write more for general viewing.i hope u get my point.a casual reader will writeoff ur poetry as boring..

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  • on Fishnets by Windhover, on May 28

    lovely

    hope u won that competition for what u wrote it.lovely work perfect rhyming and beautiful form.lovely description and picturisation.i loved the beginning and the phrase "inspiring insted the intrigue" is nice.

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