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CarlySeye

"I知 washed, I知 forgiven, I知 whole, and I知 healed. I知 cleansed and I知 glory bound. I am only a sojourner on the earth. I am but a pilgrim on this planet, on my way to perfection, and I don稚 need anybody to tell me who I am, because I know who I am. I am a child of the King, a daughter of God, born again through Jesus Christ, bought with the price of His blood. I am a new creation, totally new, thoroughly loved and completely accepted as a child of my Father, precious in His sight."

My Poetry

  • Eagle, what do you see? / Fingerprints smeared within this windowpane / the residue of winter without. / Wallpaper recoils from the cold
    316 words, 2 comments, March 20
  • The end of your life / began with a bite / from the tree of knowledge / Death swallowed from top to bottom / you became a deep hole / as t
    263 words, 13 comments, March 7. In Jesus Loves You
  • You are special to Me / I made you just like Me / / Come into the Light of my Holiness / Behold our Oneness / / This is where you belong
    72 words, 19 comments, January 17. In spiritual

Guest Book

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  • Truthful Sinner on February 18, 2009
    I know ur way older then me but tell me something interestin bout urself
  • Truthful Sinner on February 11, 2009
    wow ur the first person that i have seen from Minnesota on, i was jus stopping by to say hi
  • Done : Oh, damn, Carly, you're a hoot. on January 10, 2009
    I have been saved by your acerbic wit and quippy reparte. It's really great to have a bash buddy and I thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to hurl quaint invective my way. Thank you for your kindness to this poor ol' boy.

    al
  • Enoq : Ditto on December 4, 2008
    I never signed your guest book either! If you look at your comments I probably your biggest fan so I should have done this ages ago. You truly have a fantastic ability to capture visual and roll them off the minds tongue like butter. I have not yet read a piece of yours that I did not like! If anyone is reading this and wondering what type of work you can expect on this page, you can expect real life down to earth poems and prose about extremely well described and vivid scenes that you can either relate to immediately or you will be able to vicariously enjoy. I urge you to read her work right away!

    Thanks for always being a good critic and dependable colleague here. I hope all your recent work sums up to a happy blissful piece, if you know what I mean.

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Comments

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  • thank you

    I was staring out the window just dreaming of what will be
    and I realized that I could see more than just the dirty window, the dirty ground. I could see summer, I could see reformation of the city I could see hearts lifted to God. The higher I flew in my day dream the more glorious the view became. The seed of creation is planted in your mind's eye. Dream, dream while you are awake. dive deep into these dreams.

    I think it is time to read John

    Thank you for the comment Noble, it was very thoughtful

    Shalom

  • Well done

    This is simply lovely