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  • on [ How wisely we are made ] by Kiddy, on June 25, 2007

    nice

    Yup, this poem sure did make me smile. Beautifully written...reminds one of ones 1st real crush...and the longing and the wait.

    In the 2nd and 3rd stanzas, you've referred to a mysterious "him"....but the next part of the poem you've directly addressed to a person. Are these supposed to be two different people.

    Beutifully written otherwise. Loved the freshness and the style of this poem.

    . Rewarded 8

  • on Pause by Charoo Sood Wady, on June 20, 2007
    thanx for the critique. True, i am experimenting with my style of poetry...am into writing random thoughts these days. maybe some day i might get back to my rhymes .