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on Pause by Charoo Sood Wady, on June 20, 2007thanx for the critique. True, i am experimenting with my style of poetry...am into writing random thoughts these days. maybe some day i might get back to my rhymes
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Yup, this poem sure did make me smile. Beautifully written...reminds one of ones 1st real crush...and the longing and the wait.In the 2nd and 3rd stanzas, you've referred to a mysterious "him"....but the next part of the poem you've directly addressed to a person. Are these supposed to be two different people.
Beutifully written otherwise. Loved the freshness and the style of this poem.
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