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  • on Food You Eat by , on September 18, 2005

    Amusing and true

    I enjoyed reading this. Unique, to be sure.
    One question: Did you purposefully use “through” instead of “throw” in the following line?

    ‘Now you’ll have to through it away,’

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  • on The Balcony by Circuitsboard, on August 13, 2005
    Neither do I. I just clicked to see the functionality.
    Sometimes you just gotta be that way…