Poetry has let my subconscious run free in the darkest of forest for all to see.
- Last seen on Oct 28 12:04 PM 2008. Member since November 19, 2007.
- I am a 22 year old guy from Utah (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm student.
- I have 20 comments, 8 archived poems
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the vary knifes that he loved became his undoing. it kind of reminds me of over confident people. confidence is good, but too much confidence can be harmful. really good stuff even if that isn't its true meaning. thanks. Rewarded 4


thanks lad
yeah i was thinking twice about the "tickle" line as well. i think complicated works alot better. thanks for the honesty. i really like your critiques. your interpretation was excellent. you cease to amaze me with your almost psychic readings of my poetry. I think your interpretation is almost more poetic in your version, which i like. thanks a thousand lad