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Daniel Bush

  • Last seen on Jan 16 10:49 PM 2008. Member since November 20, 2006.
  • I am a 15 year old person
  • I have 3 comments, 2 archived poems

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  • Memory at allpoetry
    Thoughts bloom in a meadow. I pick one from the ground. It wilts between my forefingers.
    I bend down to pick another. A tsunami of brown approaches from the distance.

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  • on The Cake by Daniel Bush, on January 8, 2007
    Thank you very much for your insightful reply. I'm glad you had as much fun reading it as I did writing it.

  • on Bored in Spanish by dolphingal, on January 5, 2007
    The rhyming abab scheme is somewhat consistent, as is the rhythm, except in the fourth line. It feels like you were at a loss for words in that part, and had to hastily fill in a few more words in order to make it rhyme "right." Maybe you could change the wording a little.