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DemoBloke

  • Last seen on Apr 13 2:39 AM 2008. Member since February 1, 2008.
  • I am a 58 year old man (England)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Knocking buildings down..
  • I have 78 comments

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  • Papyrus : DB @ SP ! ! ! on February 5, 2008
    DB,

    welcome to the family, good sir! from England, eh? aye, we shall drink tea together in the chatbox!

    share the poetry,

    Pap

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  • on His Summer Dream by charlessmith, on March 9, 2008

    Great stuff.

    I like this very much. A truly well-crafted piece. Only crit from me is the second from bottom line seems over long and breaks the flow for me. Or is it intended to snap us out of the poem?

  • on Tick, Tock! by MaMa-2-be-Cindy, on March 9, 2008
    Nice work again reflecting the picture. Rules are often broken in poetry, but I can't understand why your poem remains at 22 when the tutor asked for 20. If this were an outside poetry competition your work would be disqualified. Other than that, nice images from you again.

    . Rewarded 6