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Dirty and Broken

  • Last seen on Sep 22 8:06 PM. Member since February 20.
  • I am a 16 year old person (United States)
  • I have 75 comments, 7 archived poems

My Poetry

  • [ she lays here ]
    she lays here / ~broken~ / but / beau-ti-ful / bloodied / but oh-so-desirable / she lays in MY bed / in MY room / in MY house / ^higher^ than a kite / && *drunk*er than can be / her wrists are aching / starting to / (bruise)
    171 words, September 18
  • I Must, Mustn't I?
    “it could all fall down around me / just as long as I have you right here by me” / “I’ve been waiting so long to hold you / and be back in your arms where I belong” / I wished / with all I had / to be yours again- / for you to be mine / an
    311 words, September 12

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  • Nausricx : thank you on April 29
    for commenting on my poem. Yeah, relationships, suck, but give you so much to write on

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  • on ( no title) poem, not song by Nausricx, on September 12
    my favorite is the last stanza....
    but it's an amazing poem....

  • on she dunno by Nausricx, on September 12
    reminds me of my current/previous relationship......don't know which it is- if it's my current or my previous.....*Shrugs*
    anyways, it's a really good poem, i really like it