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DrThimmel

  • Last seen on Nov 17 6:29 PM 2008. Member since October 18, 2006.
  • I am a 52 year old guy from California (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Writer, Actor, Director, Producer, Creative Artist.
  • I have 3 comments

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  • DrThimmel : No graffiti on my Wall please? ;) on July 28, 2008
    Violaters will be... talked to, friendly-ish!
  • DrThimmel : Just ME checking on ME!!! :D on February 10, 2008
    LOL!!!

    LLAP, TERRELL

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  • on Poetry Soup by celestialpie, on November 17, 2008

    Very good!!!

    Sorry for the double-posting here; I'm still learning this site's navigations and such?

    I loved this piece, it's so honest and simple, yet so complicated and "symbolistic" (metaphorical?) to be read... BRAVO, CelestialPie!!!

    I see little (to "no") "improvements" I could suggest - PERFECT!!!

    DrThimmel

  • on Poetry Soup by celestialpie, on November 17, 2008
    Sorry, I left a comment (on another piece you'd written - the "Masturbate at the office" piece) earlier - somewhere else here - and won't repeat it again, okay?
    I hope you got it; I'm not really familiar with this site's setup and such... sorry again?

    DrThimmel B

    P.S. Please ignore this - it was intended for the other piece you wrote - my bad?!!!

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