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Dws

  • Last seen on Nov 6 2:48 PM 2006. Member since October 2, 2006.
  • I am a guy (Canada)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Student.
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  • on you only live five times by , on October 4, 2006
    no pauses.

    thank you.

  • on Corrupted! by Barenya, on October 3, 2006

    like it

    Topic catches my eye. People and their obsessions. Their wants. And they leave so many blind to it. The structure of the poem is good... but I say that about any sort of structure given to a poem really.

    The whole poem is very... accurate? It is true to its theme. I like it.

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