I write because there is nothing else a writer can do to feel whole. If I was a painter it would be the same of painting.
We are all here for 3 reasons. Some of us for 1 or 2 of those reasons and some of us for all 3.
1: We want to read other poetry.
2: We want others to read our poetry.
3: We are bored.
I like to consider myself all 3.
Please leave some sort of comment if you read any of my work. Even if you did not like it, I crave the feed back and would love to know what you think.
We are all here for 3 reasons. Some of us for 1 or 2 of those reasons and some of us for all 3.
1: We want to read other poetry.
2: We want others to read our poetry.
3: We are bored.
I like to consider myself all 3.
Please leave some sort of comment if you read any of my work. Even if you did not like it, I crave the feed back and would love to know what you think.
- Member since September 25, 2008.
- My mood is , and quote is "Contemplative ".
- I am a 27 year old man from Texas (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Thinking about writing..
- I have 454 comments, 39 archived poems, 4 poems, 4 stories
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- Rhythms Riddle at allpoetry
First a beat to start the tick,
Then add the strum but not too thick, - Animalistic Dance at allpoetry
I could smell her sweet aroma,
From the room across the hall. - Vagabond at allpoetry
Sun split are the lips of this tired soul.
Too young yet to fly but too old to grow.
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CarlySeye : Roger that Houston on December 4, 2008I never signed your guest book? huh...
A testimony:
Your writing is classic, but daring; intelligent without being pretentious; deeply inspired and totally relateable. Everything I have read has brought me on a journey, sparked emotions and provoked me to read more.
Keep writing, the world needs the writer you are and will become.
SHALOM
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Dr. POGO on December 2, 2008I love your new face pic.
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LifeIsIronic : Jus Had ta Sign It on November 22, 2008You are a truly great writer, Your poems that i've read so far sometimes seem flawless. they have a wide range of emotion, Several different points of view. and most of all Great meaning, and beautiful rhymind methods. and you try so many different ways, Just completely Awesome, Keep up the Great Job!!
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Fastlane2121 : Hi Enoq on November 3, 2008Just stopped by to let you know your poems are great! You are like the bards of legend! No kidding!
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on Short-Sighted by LifeIsIronic, on December 30, 2008
wow
I have been away for a while but it is quite impressive to see how much you have grown as a writer in such a short time. You are getting much better at maintaining your meaning throughout your work while holding a steady meter.
Good stuff man!
Fav line:
"to prideful to recognize you're mistaken
your thoughts that hurt someone unknown
and left his last few breaths forsaken
not till the end was the truth ever shown"
not the best BUT!
VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY TRUE!!! I love your message in this piece. Great work! I have been hoping to see you do something like this for a while. Your spot on and I think you did a great job with the scheme you set up here. Keep up the great work and take your own medicine here more often because I love it!