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ErnaniBlackHearted

  • Member since January 15.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Alright, lets get to work again".
  • I am a 18 year old guy (Brazil)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Playing guitar or thrashing my legs on a skateboard .
  • I have 8 comments, 3 archived poems, 4 poems, 1 journal

My Poetry

  • Carlos, the friend not met
    Carlos Drummond de Andrade is, arguably, the most important Modernist poet from my home country: Brazil. This poem was made as a tribute fo
    160 words, 1 comment, January 27
  • What is and should be
    Some one has very interresting views on his deceptions as a poet
    118 words, 3 comments, January 23. In poetry, angst, thought, proof, fail
  • The truth
    the truth is.. / I have no feelings anymore / they have been killed and thrown aside / Because there restless snares weren't longer accepted / I heard what I felt has started revolutions in a place / condemned to be bopping, so
    168 words, January 15. In truth, tears, feelings, realism, anti-romantism, anti-romantics

My journal entries

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  • on Sinking by LoveandTorment, on January 30

    If this helps, IDK!!

    Man, if this help, I feel the same exact way. Waiting for her to come by when I don't really know when and if she's going to come. It's funny how what's sticks to your memory are little moments, like a lunch, a quick glance and/or smile. You probably know what I'm talking about..
    Get well.
    Completely Random Stranger

    language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.

  • on Zero by Miss Tallulah Belle, on January 29
    "It's a neurotoxin and excites the neurons in the brain, No wonder I love the shit!"
    wow,makes the poem have this feeling of double-edged meaning if you know what I mean. Makes Diet Coke more like coke-cocaine and less like coca-cola (sorry for the acid language, but that's the only way the idea gets through).
    The first verse also made me think about what made my consumism start. That was a nice and ironic view on society's consuming gear in general. I don't get to read much stuff like this.
    Good Job!