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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy : Welcome to Sharepoetry Evske on April 8, 2008
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  • on Gone (a new song lyric) by riveralex, on April 8, 2008

    no

    I thought it read well, and I particuarly liked the last three verses. the coffee theme evokes a rich imagery most people can relate to and a musical rhythm that is appealing,although I did find the 5 lined second verse a little awkward

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