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1. Venus Doom -Him

Leave all behind now to watch her crawl
Through our dark gardens of insanity
She’ll be the light to guide you back home
Just give her a kiss worth dying for
And open your arms

[Chorus:]
Watch me fall for you
My venus doom
Hide my heart where all dreams are entombed
My venus doom
All dreams are of you
My venus doom

Grieve all your hearts out and she’ll writhe enthralled
In tragic ecstatic agony
And in her flames we will die some more
Just show me her life worth living for
And light up the dark

[Chorus]

Hold me inside your infernal offering
Touch me as I fall
Don't lose yourself in this suffering yet
Hold on

Watch me fall for you
My venus doom
Hide my heart where all dreams are entombed

Watch me fall for you
My venus doom
Hide my heart where all dreams are entombed
My venus doom
All tears are of you
My venus doom


My name is Alba.I am a law student second year .At the moment I'm working on self publishing a dark poetry collection .I like Him and love writing dark poetry .
Other hobbies:reading,cooking,wandering ,history ,listening music ,writing .
Favorite place:my bedroom
Favorite color :blue
Favorite band: Him
Heroes:Ville Valo
Favorite writers:Ernest Koliqi,Migjeni ,Xeroabyss
I believe in friendship,love,god

  • Last seen 9 hours ago. Member since October 14, 2008.
  • My mood is , and quote is "I'll be ready when the curtain might fall ...".
  • I am a 19 year old girl (Albania)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm law student second year.
  • Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/february_23
  • I support the site as a gold member
  • I have 146 comments, 3 archived poems

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My Poetry

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  • Special thank you (not a poem)
    Hi ! I just wanted to thank all those people who read my poems and added me to their favorite list .Thanks for taking time to read my work
    178 words, 4 comments, January 2
  • Hate
    I hate the way you live your life / So cold / darkness embraced / I hate the poetry you write / Clueless ,sunk in pain / I hate the music t
    108 words, 2 comments, January 1
  • Plums
    Ernest's dead / An old lady eats plums upon his tomb / As wet papers touch my skin / Ernest's dead / Two girls cry for the one who's go
    96 words, 4 comments, December 1, 2008. In Dark, Sad, Nature, Death
  • Albans
    Spahis killed / Raped ,murdered / Fragile dreams of innocent lives / / Down in the south / Among other victims I was born / Brought to
    161 words, 3 comments, December 1, 2008. In Personal, Dark

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My journal entries

  • a.I.R

     

     




    Nevicaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 

     

     

    Today I read the first pages from my teen romance .I couldn't believe how different life was back in 2007. It's just so different  from the poems I've been writing and peaceful ,hopeful ,beautiful ...

    I want to go back to the place where I met Alex
    To the place where Ania lived
    back to those moments were I dreamed about you
    back to those moments where you dreamed about me .

    I wanna listen to Blue all day
    follow you back home
    run to those paths
    and feel free
    I wanna open my wings
    throw coins in the river and laugh
    laugh to your stupid jokes just like I did when I was 18

    I wanna write m

    January 5, In Memories, Personal, Real time..  Read all 500 words → Make first comment?
  • Me and my poetry

     

    So I started writing poetry back in September .I wrote about 20 dark poems and I came to the point that I wanted to give up .I've been through hard time .I decided to post this journal entry because writing about my bad feelings makes me feel better .That's my art and this is my world .
    Anyway my poetry is dark .Art is art .I don't cut myself or use drugs to experience darkness .
    If you go deep in those lines ,you'll see the light .Real or surreal that's the way my poetry is     .

    Ho voglia di te

     

     

    Max De Angelis ~Nevica

     

    Nevica
    January 4, In Personal.  Read all 700 words → Make first comment?

Guest Book

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  • February Angel : Dark Corner - poetry site on January 3
    I've created this dark poetry site and decided to post the link in here.Would be really glad if anyone of you would join.
    http://endless-dark.ning.com/
    Thank you
    ~Alba~
  • XxEmo CuppycakesxX : hey on December 5, 2008
    hey thanks for the comments on my poems
  • February Angel on November 10, 2008
    marcusmoore : Hey FebAngel on October 24, 2008
    I can see Brian beat me to it, he's got a little too much time on his hands LoL. He's a good guy though and is always willing to help. That's what this site's about, but I already explained that one to ya. I hope you've enjoyed your experience here so far and if there's anything that you need help with or would just like to talk, please feel free to just drop me a line, You can send me a message by taking the cursor to my name, then hit "send message" and you can then type into that area anything you want to tell me, and only I will see it, not like when you talk to people in the chatterbox, that's for everybody to see and there's some rules in there. So it's usually better to just message if ya wanna talk about anything personal, illegal LoL like smoking pot or something. or if ya just wanna talk. Well I Hope to hear from ya sometime soon.

    TTYSoon Angel
    Marcus

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Comments

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  • on Night-Cry by bigcoolyo, 2 days ago
    It's really good .Haunting imagery .Never thought of sth like that .Nice piece.

  • on Special thank you (not a poem) by February Angel, on January 3
    I really like Him ,so I got the idea from their album "Venus doom" .It was the first pen name that I used when I joined all poetry .Anyway decided to change it again .
    ~Alba~