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  • Question of Love at allpoetry
    Dreams are my necessity, lost in dreams.
    Longing to be lost, obsessed in fantasy.
  • Complete at allpoetry
    I rejoice in this choice, that is I.
    I savor every moment of my new life.
  • I Give at allpoetry
    My sense of smell entices the lust within.
    My touch longs to feel the warmth of you.

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  • on Nightmare by bowmore bill, on August 12, 2007

    very cleverly written

    Your words sart the reader on a journey, they may think is going in one direction, then it defines itself and creates dark sd feelings,, your comparisons to black plague and holocaust comparing ((( mad cow disease ))) the sadness of any killing for any reason is definite and disheartening,,wonderful write if I followed and understood your intentions if not this is what I read fromyour words,,,blessings...Firestorm

    language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 3, form: 4.

  • on untitled by , on August 11, 2007
    " are you no taken by the thrill? " did you mean " are you (not) taken by the thrill? " maybe a typo,, ifeel the urges you have to be chosen with a fever written in a few lines,,
    as I said I somewhere else this is not my favorite type of poem but I do feel your feelings from the words that you have chosen,,,it indeed has a definite flavor,,,blessings...Firestorm

    language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 1.