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  • on 28 Jazz Current by oldsmoke, on March 27, 2007

    ehh....

    Tis not lacking in the beat dept that is for sure, but it seems to lack in substance. some of these observations could be true for any music, and even some other things, but you do hit on the key components that make jazz.. well jazz, but without the generalized sensations, it would gain a certain level of wonderment that would make even the stiffest jazz critic loosen his standards on what is or isn't "good" jazz..

  • on The Cowardly Mistakes of Youth by Fortunes Fool, on March 5, 2007

    Thanks

    I agree the thirdlineis a little out of place, but the whole poem flew at once from my pen to the paper, and I just never bothered to cut it out for fear that the poem as a whole would lose some sort of completeness...
    I enjoyed your thoughts and am excited to hear that this has been enjoyed... at least by someone.