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on Merry... by Lad, on December 22, 2007No suggestions - but a big award to one of my finest friends on this site. I got up early this morning to send a message to you, then saw and read your poem. Its gist I send back to you, with a special thanks first for the write, then for all your wonderful help on my 'poetry road' of the past year. God bless and do have a joyous Christmas and New Year's Day. Frans
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on Lord I'm Trying by JMDople, on December 5, 2007I am not one of the 'brilliant poets' either on AP or SP, and of poetry form, I now nothing, but I will venture my thoughts [where angels fear to tread] on this lovely poem. I experience a number of levels in this: the need and the experience or better still, the prayer and the praise; the statement of faith or 'the knowing', and there is also the humble willing of allowing the Lord to take control - or submission. This is a beautiful.
Dear poet, the contents of your poem served as my 'reading' for quite time this morning, and therefore I answer it 'back' to you, but in how I experienced it in my heart [hope you do not mind me doing this to and with your poem. God bless. Frans
Lord Jesus, I'm trying -
please show me the way
Lord Jesus, please help me
to follow where ever you lead
Lord Jesus, this I plead.
In need's comfort, and
my load's hard to bare -
I know you're near me my load to share.
I call on you, and
never will you turn away -
so lead me Lord, show me the way.
Through battles so long and so rough,
You give me strength -
Lord that's more than enough.
No storm is too dark Lord, and
no valley is ever too low -
I'll turn to you daily for mercy
help me not to stray.
Lord, you are always near -
I shall have no fear
no matter where I go.
