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Freddy...

  • Member since October 18, 2007.
  • I am a 18 year old person
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  • on Jesus and Jackson Pollock by billbrando, on October 18, 2007

    Bizzare

    How very unique! ! It isn't every day that I hear of Jesus being spoken about in the same sentence as Pollock but, may i add, Its not every day i see a poem so well written. Every one of my congratualations on the use of language, the harsh language really does help to create the image I believe you are trying to.

    Thank you. FRED.

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.

  • on An Unkindness of Ravens by Windhover, on October 18, 2007

    Less is always so much more...

    A very well written poem . I can't help noticing the raven is continuously reffured to as 'She'! Is there any further meaning into this? haha!

    A very pleasurable read x

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.