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  • Panic Attack on the Bus to Work
    I got back in from work at nine to / Reheated pasta I had had last night then / I went to bed, my stomach upended, by / A sickly dread I couldn't quite put my finger on. / / Of course, he was no help at all, he / Mmmed and aahed, behind his p
    139 words, 1 comment, November 27
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  • on Revisiting The Fireflies by scribbledthoughts, on August 29
    I loved this for the many many reasons other people have commented on below
    I'd just like to say I'd keep the order of "up above colliding" in the 4th stanza however; I think that because it follows "diving" directly on the next line it emphasises the exuberance and life of that part of the poem. Anyway don't know if that explanation made sense - but again, loved it!

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  • on Money-Sickly, Kitten by GmH, on August 29
    I'm glad I could inject some life in to the scorned woman for you! And also glad you enjoyed the way this one makes its imperfect stumbling across the topic,
    Thanks!