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GmH

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  • Christopher Columbus
    I am Christopher Columbus, and Oh / How are you the sea! / I am the tip of the crest / Of the wave, and see how / Are you the the sea! / / Look upon Jonah returned! / Look to the sole of my heel, / I am the foot of the ocean / As you lo
    230 words, March 15
  • Why Bloomington?
    Was she called Bloomington / Who spoke / And you looked flustered / Your cheeks roses / Or too much whisky / Just after lunch yesterday? / / Bloomington who could / If only she knew how, / Yet still can't work out / Why your voice fal
    121 words, 1 comment, January 8
  • Fourth Etude: Heart
    How are we now? / You've been out / Hours now. / / Are you cutting corners / And I'm one of them? / Warning me first / / Once then and ov
    37 words, 2 comments, January 6

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  • on Half Past Forever by TheChesireThing, on January 8
    I like your rhythm here, there's a sense of the poem flowing onwards - like time.

  • on Fourth Etude: Heart by GmH, on January 8
    Yeah I did mean to put '3 line poem' there! I definitely see the stuttering you mentioned, I'm left wondering whether I need to sort that out or crank it up a bit and make something of it? Thanks for the comment!