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  • Brian Balzer : Hello X--SilverQuill--X on December 26, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a smaller version of allpoetry, yet it is a rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I will send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you if you find them helpful and if you think of anything that could be added. Just a note, this is not an automated message. It is a personal welcome from a fellow poet. Welcome.
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  • on Gone by Goin 2 Ashes, on December 26, 2008
    Well that'sa haunted sort of poem I liked the idea and imagery of the piece. 1st stanza was good written but 2nd was just fabulus and 3rd was nice too. I enjoyed not the best but well you could do better. My favourite lines were:
    "Though his eyes seem to glare
    He's not really there
    For a funeral he's posed
    His eyes have been closed"
    A dead man's story. Nice anyways. Keep on penning!
    ~~~~Good LUCK~~~~

    language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 4, tone: 3, form: 3.