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  • skipeople : Welcome to SP! on April 1, 2008
    Glad to chat, help, or be ignored. Which ever may flip your pancakes!

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  • on Intimacy by Windhover, on January 2, 2009

    Interesting

    I can see the lure of a dancer and what she proposes in this poem. It is interesting the way you write about the superficiality of it.

    language: 3, rhythm: 1, subject: 2, tone: 3, form: 2.

  • on Choices by CarlySeye, on January 2, 2009

    Excellent

    I like the rich discription. It evoked the senses, and took me into a different time.

    language: 5, rhythm: 2, subject: 3, tone: 5, form: 4.