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PLEASE REMOVE YOUR SHOES. THIS IS HOLY GROUND.


PAUL VAN DYK - NEW YORK CITY


I watch the sky turn black to blush
Head still spinning from the rush
Of all the things I did the night before

And looking down from my hotel
These dawn-lit streets begin to fill
With memories of you and I
On a New York City night

On a New York City night


I shake my head to clear the sounds
The traffic horns, the growing crowd
The Sun awaking over Central Park

But still it creeps beneath my skin
All of these heartbeats in the din
With concrete dreams stirring to life
On a New York City night

On a New York City night


And I take it with me when I leave
The crowded skyline, the energy
The sleepless city always leaves its mark

Just close my eyes and I'm back again
The neon flush upon our skin
Still wrapped in thoughts of love and wine
On a New York City night

On a New York City night


My Poetry

  • Worlds away from happy endings / In the coss-stitch of the days, / Eyes they wait for me forever, / Eyes that write lies on your face. / /
    24 words, March 1
  • We are oceans away from home this night, / The whole the world alone. / / But our riches will be plenty / And our skies will be bright. /
    31 words, 1 comment, March 1. In Thoughts
  • Cold and empty. / This will break me. / Heaven save me. / Cold and empty. / Here beneath your feet / I'm waiting. / /
    21 words, February 28. In Dark, Spiritual, Thoughts, Pain, Life

Guest Book

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  • Kastor on January 26
    Jesus!! It's you!!



  • Twila- on September 28, 2009
    Your poetry has always been beautiful.
  • TheJOKERSaid on April 20, 2009
    could you please explain to me how one sucks a fuck?........hahahaha
  • Kelsoo. on April 15, 2009
    ryan, I dislike your new name...

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  • on Boob by dave ochs, on March 13
    you know i loved this one.

  • on Gaea's Song by HelloMyNameIsJesus, on February 24
    the first part of your criticism is all perfectly valid. i agree with you. not every poem's a gem that's for sure. i think i'm going to leave 'then' in though because in my reading of it i like the flow. to wrong a night means to waste it or leave it unfulfilled, from short to long is referring to sleeplessness. it may be a bit of a heavy metaphor but i really liked the sound so i kept it. just a matter of preference i guess. thanks for reading. ryan.