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HikaFuUmiShiOuRi

  • Last seen 2 days ago. Member since November 11, 2008.
  • I am a 23 year old person
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My Poetry

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  • Child Rearing
    Mother said she loves me / That I am everything to her; / Father said he protect me / From all the harm and the boys. / / My mom said that
    247 words, December 27, 2008. In Life, Thoughts, Society
  • Procrastination
    This repetitious occurrence, / Of a given simple task accessible for execution / And the habit of unwillingness to deliver, / Avoiding every possible means to accomplishment. / / Music ready for conducting, / Dancers eager to perform, / Act
    107 words, December 27, 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Personal, Free verse
  • Smile!
    When I opened the fridge, / And to my surprise, / There was nothing for me to eat. / / My growling stomach / Hinted my way, / “Feed me, I’m freakin’ hungry!” / / Mind in debate, / To cook or to buy, / O lazy crazy self. / / To b
    78 words, December 11, 2008
  • The Stairs
    Staring up at the high elevation, / Here I am immobile, / My legs, extremely sore / From the long distance run, / My goal is to reach the top. / / As my foot take the first step, / My arms grab hold of the railing, / To hold and support m
    141 words, December 11, 2008. In Free verse, Personal, Thoughts, Life

My other items

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  • The Ring at allpoetry
    To give then accept
    This vow which oaths
  • Like the Wind at allpoetry
    I am like the wind
    Unseen but heard.

Guest Book

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  • Brian Balzer : Hello HikaFuUmiShiOuRi on November 11, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. This site is pretty much like allpoetry except on a smaller scale. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. There are some things I can send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you would like them messaged to you.
    Read ya 'round,
    BKB

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Comments

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  • on lullaby by mufinhxc, on December 28, 2008

    Very interesting!

    Love your word selections! The following lines are my favorite:
    "because i get no sleep
    when she slaughters my sheep" <-- made me laugh!
    "but she's got her claws burried deep in my regrets
    she's whispering my flaws to keep me in debt" <-- wow. very meaningful!

    . Rewarded 3

  • on She's Dying Inside by The Distant Unknown, on December 28, 2008
    Very well written! I didn’t, however, really quite feel the sadness and pain as you’ve described in your poem. The innocence of your perspective didn’t quite match the actual emotions of the one suffering, at is in my opinion. Still very well written! Good word selections!

    . Rewarded 4