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HoneyFire

  • Last seen on Jun 11 7:52 PM 2008. Member since June 13, 2006.
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  • on Stop. Don't Touch. by oxymoron270, on June 11, 2008
    it is a great poem. it is self explanatory. the end is shifting away from how the story began but your readers can figure it out.
    I know this had to difficult for you to write and post. what a terribole experience.
    nicely written.

  • on Who Am I? by oxymoron270, on June 11, 2008
    this poem makes all the sense in the world. you know why? because you put your heart and soul into it and you expressed all of what you were feeling. this poem is inspiration and full of truth.
    you have mad talent in poetry.
    keep your head up and know that you are loved by so many...even if you dont feel like you are.

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