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  • silence at allpoetry
    Where did the words go
    that fell from my mind
  • whispers at allpoetry
    softly the whispers arise in the heart
    quiet lingers still in this early hour
  • Awakening at allpoetry
    Awakening my soul, her slumber once was deep / Just below my navel, in silence she would sleep / Waiting for the time, when love would impart / My soul now quivers with the dream of your heart / Your voice, so softly,

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  • on Jihad by Papyrus, on September 17, 2008

    descriptive

    While there are spelling errors - the piece as a whole has good substance - the reader is drawn and can feel the depth. Could be a strong paragraph in a novel!

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  • on Answer by mojojames, on September 17, 2008

    interesting

    An intersting tale - leading the ready deeper into the story; flows freely. Inspirational.
    Thanks for sharing this with us!

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