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Incredible Fairy

  • Last seen on Aug 22 6:59 PM 2007. Member since August 5, 2005.
  • I am a 18 year old guy from Michigan (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Student.
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  • Barbara : Welcome to Sharepoetry! on August 20, 2007
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  • on Symptoms of Hate by , on August 11, 2005

    it's fine

    Personally, I thought it was good. Yes, it does make sense. It makes perfect sense. Some express hatred loudly, others quietly. Both seems to justify it.

    As far as imagery goes, the second type makes me imagine a big bully. The first gives me the image of a over-zealous preacher that is too caught silently preaching hate to his audience. Yes, I’d say you did an accurate job describing both types of hate.

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