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Itinerary

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Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best.
T.D.

  • Last seen on Sep 21 9:47 PM. Member since May 12.
  • I am a 17 year old man (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Learning In School.
  • I have 12 comments, 4 archived poems

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  • on You were great by dave ochs, on May 15
    "Hope your enjoying
    The virgins"

    Your last stanza was very strong and really was a blow at the muslim beliefs?
    It was a bit scattered but it made sense since you were collecting different examples of wrong doings in the world. I liked this poem alot even though it was a depressing look at the real world.

  • on hmmmmmm by ardvark, on May 14

    Finish up bummy

    I like it so far and want to see how you finish it.