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Jao-Quin

  • Last seen on Aug 9 7:14 PM 2008. Member since September 26, 2006.
  • I am a 22 year old guy (Great Britain)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Layout Artist / Graphic Designer.
  • I have 18 comments, 3 archived poems

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  • on Israeli Warfare by , on November 21, 2006
    i am perfectly calm. you seem to be the one riled up.

    my point was simply that i understand your aggression, but your poem -- as a poem -- has no merit. it is nondescript prose.

  • on Tangled Web by OneBean, on November 3, 2006
    Aha! How sexist of me to assume that if a member's picture is of a man kissing an attractive woman that the member is the man.

    Actually, the poem makes more sense (to me) if written by a woman, particularly the part about "all you'll know / is only everything I show". That's a bit questionable from a man to a woman, but the other way makes a lot more sense.