John Hickman
From Houston, Texas.
"Still Water Runs Deep."
- A term to which I am commonly associated.
Now is the time
Now is the place.
To quit saying maybe
And once again, give hope a race,
Once again, give true love a taste.
A change of actions is screaming
It is hissing from my heart
Telling my entire being as a whole
To rip this pain and anguish to parts.
Now is the time to take things apart
To rebuild, to mend this broken heart
And obtain everything I long to behold.
- An anthem I once wrote ...
I desire my words through poetry be foot marks in a human's pursuit of Truth in his or her life. I pray I may inspire even you.
Thanks for your time.
“Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until another heart whispers back. Those who wish to sing always find a song. At the touch of a lover, everyone becomes a poet.”
Plato
From Houston, Texas.
"Still Water Runs Deep."
- A term to which I am commonly associated.
Now is the time
Now is the place.
To quit saying maybe
And once again, give hope a race,
Once again, give true love a taste.
A change of actions is screaming
It is hissing from my heart
Telling my entire being as a whole
To rip this pain and anguish to parts.
Now is the time to take things apart
To rebuild, to mend this broken heart
And obtain everything I long to behold.
- An anthem I once wrote ...
I desire my words through poetry be foot marks in a human's pursuit of Truth in his or her life. I pray I may inspire even you.
Thanks for your time.
“Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until another heart whispers back. Those who wish to sing always find a song. At the touch of a lover, everyone becomes a poet.”
Plato
- Last seen on Nov 11 2:02 PM. Member since August 30.
- My mood is
, and quote is "motivated and loved". - I am a 21 year old man from Texas (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm taking college courses where I sit and think about writing..
- I have 5 comments, 6 archived poems
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on she went when the flowers were blooming by blazingleo, on August 31
Great piece.
How sad you relay your thoughts and actions... opening lines made me interested to know.
Who was she? and Where did she go? And what was her relation to you?
All pondered.
Simple and straight use of diction, but it worked out well here.
Maybe think about leave some space between stanzas for better appearance.
Good job.


I like, but needs some repair
The first stanza was written in much better form than the other two, who were more meaningful to me.Gripping Subject to me.
I actually broke a girls heart once, dumbest mistake of my life.
But that caused me to start writing and I haven't stopped since.
Great poem. Also, if you can, keep writing to this one. IT's good.