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- Rêve et Reveil at allpoetry
Warmth which with wonder, waking we rediscover with the dawn,
is printed, coded cunningly upon life’s sheets well worn. - Dreams at allpoetry
Dreams surf cross-currents, reel unwinds from real to hasten selfless spirits who would heal harsh wounds society inflicts - for stars scar - Dreams Drawn to Real Reel Redefining 'Peace' at allpoetry
May phoenix rise from embers whose glow shows
Complicity far further forwards flows...
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on Continuity by gingergreentea, on August 5, 2005
promising ...
...It was about time
that I rejoin my
roots. ...Perhaps It was about time to rejoin /or / It was about time (that) I rejoined
...
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Promise...sing
... petals fill the air.Confetti guides me onward
to my future and my vows.
Perhaps this could be edited to flow :
petal confetti,
airborne, guides me onwards
into the future meets my vows
just a passing thought …
regards Jonathan
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