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  • Clouds Over The Valley at allpoetry
    Clouds over the valley
    Carpet the dreams of the olives
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    Death in my left hand, possibility in my right.A battle without mercy; a power unknown throughout the centuries.Like a pendulum I swing in and out of life.In one instant I am overwhelmed by the sensation of coming death, anot
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    Palms over silent deserts
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  • on The White Gate by Justin3, on November 25, 2006
    Thank you for your comment I am glad you liked it.However your interpretation is not excactly what I had in mind,the white gate is an actual gate in Malta which leads to the harbour/market area of a town and I am walking through it and whilst I notice the scene around me I also remember another time I walked through with someone.However I am glad to hear you had your own interpretation which is different because when I write I like to leave everything open to individual interpretation so thats a bonus.