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KC Mae

  • Last seen on Oct 29 1:59 AM 2006. Member since May 9, 2006.
  • I am a girl from New York (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm student and tearcatcher.
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  • on " It's Poetry" by Windhover, on August 8, 2006
    oooh I looove it.

    Sorry I'm so picky about stuff like that, I'm a tough critic I guess.  

    Much better ending.

  • on " It's Poetry" by Windhover, on August 8, 2006
    nono I understand that the whole point of the poem is loss and losing something beautiful, almost like a sacrafice.  I just don't like 'it stank'.  I don't like the word choice I don't like how that ends the poem.  I think there could have been a much better way to use the last line than 'it stank'.  I love the message though.