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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy : Welcome to Sharepoetry Kassey on December 8, 2007
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  • on Sleep Where Are You by Kassey, on December 8, 2007

    Lad

    Lad, I am glad you enjoyed my poem, coming from someone as clever with their words as you are, it is a great complement. I am one of those people who just gets the urge to put things into verse, mainly at times of stree, of which I have had a lot lately. However, I have happy times too and I write about them. I have just a few weeks ago put many of my verses into a book and had enough printed to give to my children, family and friends. One day when I am gone, hopefully not for many years yet, they will have something very personal of me to keep. I wish I could express myself as well as you, mine is simple in comparison. However, it is what I can do and that is what matters. thank you again for your kind words..
    Krassey

  • on Leaves Fell Deeper This Year by Lad, on December 8, 2007
    Lad
    I am not sure why but I seem to have sent you a comment and it has gone into cyberspace somewhere, so I will try to repeat it. Obviously not verbatum.
    I had said that I Did not get it in your poem "Leaves Fell Deeper This Year". I am so glad that you did not take ooffence,you took the time to explain your words to me. Reading it again, a few times, I GET IT. I fear, however, that the reason I did not get it was because the once strong tree that I am with spread its future growth, its' leaves in too many directions, too hard to chase, I could not keep up. twice I have come home to rake the leaves together again, yet, sadly the leaves still fly around with the wind. I am not a strong tree, I am wilting away with Parkinsons Disease yet I do not feel sorry for my disease, the worst thing I have to bear is my Tree.
    I apologise, this is not about me it is about you. thank you for sparing the time to explain your words to me, maybe it was too close to home for me to even want to understand. You have a very clever way of telling the truth yet hiding it to those who do not want to know. Or have I still not got it. This is what I now feel about your poem. I hope your leaves will be raked and packed together to stay and re-seed together in their own space.
    next time I will read your words with a different mind, yet if I don't get it, will you spare the time to explain to me again.
    Life is good stay safe and stay happy
    Krassey