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Closer To Reality

Get close. / Now closer. / Into the mind of my lunacy, / and I'll tell you why we don't belong. / Because we are different. / and irrelevan

172 words, 1 comment, September 6. In Dark, Society, Personal, Life, Thoughts
Prison Perceptions

Dear love and dear life; / to me you are these- / Without me I hope / peace of mind finds you. / If your heart be still / and your imprison

141 words, 8 comments, March 14, 2007. In Sad, Love, Free verse
Mentation On a Sunny Day

163 words, February 28, 2007. In Nature, Hope, Free verse

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Brian Balzer : Hi Kayla, on September 28

I came to read your new poem and it occured to me that I hadn't signed your guest book. I get to be your first what an honor. Feel free to stop by my homepage and take a stroll through my Poetry Garden story which is like a philosophy. It's not very long. I think you'd like it. If you wouldn't mind I'd love to have you sign my guestbook too. Feel free to message
me anytime, I love to visit.
Read ya now,
BKB

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on Prison Perceptions by Kayla Ratava, on September 29
You understood it absolutely the way I meant it! Bravo!
on The Poetic Sea by Brian Balzer, on September 29

Inspirational!
This poem is so positive and in a way shows how not only the reader, but also the poet can be affected by his/her own writing.
In stanza 24, line 3, you misspelled attention. Good luck in your poetry garden!