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Kevin

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  • so many paths through things
    objects in space

    injecting dejection, their presence
    startles my sense of splendor
    as rain wakes me from a sunlight nap

    the grandness of vision
    is not its impor

    63 words, 43 comments, July 10, 2005

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  • Column: Advanced background options available at allpoetry
    On the edit background page, there are now checkboxes on the right to a) have the background image stay on the left edge of the screen, and turn off the line (if there was one).

    These options are in the right
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    Are currently underway. Please be patient while I go around fixing bugs and things.

    Known bugs: pages that had a tiling background are only showing the background on the inner part of the page.
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    It has dawned on me that most of our poets probably don't realize that everyone's monitor is different, so just because their screen looks great now, it doesn't look great on everyones.

    I briefly go into what the site looks like currently on mo

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  • himanshumodi : Very narrow page! on July 11
    Hi Kevin,

    My page is torn down in three columns... one for the standard links on the right. Beyond that is a huge column for an advertisement, which leaves very little space for the poetry! I understand that advertisements are necessary for ths survival of entertainment... but could they not be realigned for better page readablity??

    Regards,
    Himanshu
  • rara-avis : I have a question on March 16
    as said, I have a question. My former user account Sarcastic-statement is still inhere and it is a bit annoying that I cant get comments on my old work anymore (they are archived), I have completly forgotten my password and I have changed e-mail adr since. So is there any thing i can do ?
  • Papyrus : Kevin! on December 4, 2007

    - you're like the "Tom" of SP. cool.

    thanx for the ultra-underground-poetry-junky-online-community!

    give me a shout if ya need anything!

    Pap ;>

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  • First, I enjoyed the oldpoetry like title.

    line2: "that he STILL does too" perhaps?
    lol, nice humor!

    2nd line in the last stanza felt a bit short to me. Laurel is such a complicated image also, it's hard to know which aspect you're bringing in...

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  • on you know.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar, on February 11, 2006
    great linebreaks, it really pushed this piece along.  the pink is a bit bright for me!  'you slept away by me' doesn't sound quite right to me?  I like the kinkiness though

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