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  • Last seen on Nov 23 1:37 PM. Member since August 18, 2006.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Gonna miss vijay".
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Not Writing :).
  • I have 356 comments, 1 archived poem

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  • my Lost Love at allpoetry
    Since the minute I said NO
    I did wander everywhere
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  • Rapture of Love at allpoetry
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  • rhianon on July 19
    hey thankyou very much for your comment, it was much appreiciated sometimes when others tell u what they think its almost as reasureing and theraputic as actually writing so again thank you and your work is insipred xxxxx
  • gnosisonG : Kiddy the Kind! on May 14
    Sorry I canīt be in India for what I am sure will be an unforgettably romantic and wonderful wedding! I shall be thinking of you and sending you both best hopes and wishes!

    Simon
  • Kingly King : Little Princess on April 10, 2007
    Cutest princess who is capable of penetrating ur heart without your knowledge....Synonymous to intelligence and knowledge...

    She is a great poetess.

    Glad to be her poet pal here!

    Kinley
  • cool pandit on January 8, 2007

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  • Hey rhythm, I wish you granny speedy recovery. The days are fresh in my memory. The care, love and advice of your granny. You have well knit this one. This poem, to me, is best in its subject and tone. There are few weaker rhythms that slow down the flow, may be my reading pace didn't favor me getting the read right. Overall it's a great write. Great read.

    Thanks for sharing.
    Much Love
    Kiddy

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  • on A hollow breath by kittyeaglepig, on October 28
    I gave three reads, I couldn't find the right idea yet... The poem is very simple with its diction, still I find it mystic... Every line philosophizes different meanings/truths... 'Past many doors, closed with need' - my favorite. Deep with its meaning and thoughtful phrases, this poem is well knitted...
    it's very introspective..
    Thanks for sharing
    Keep writing
    Love
    -Kiddy

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