I'm an aspiring writer and a revolutionary. I've been away from this site fore a rather long time. Coming back to it, I see that a lot of things have changed. Most of my poetry is in the archives, but it's still on here. It pleased me to see this.
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- I am a woman from Kansas (United States)
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on Opened Up To All by youcrazydiamond, on January 25, 2007
Rhythmic
Rhythmic if a bit emo, however, most people who have been through anything in life go through periods where they feel this way. Those who can't relate haven't lived. You say what you mean eloquently. I hate to get so personal, but this poem reflects im many ways exactly how I feel right now, though mostly through my own interpretation of it and how I'm applying it to my own situation. Egotistical interpretation on my part? Perhaps. However, the skill you show is truly remarkable. The metaphors are non-specific enough to allow the reader to relate, while being specific enough for the thoughts expressed in the poem to be clear. This is not an easily achievable happy medium. If you're not happy with it yet, then all that is really needed is some tweaking here and there.
Hmmm....
The use of figurative language is very frank and down to earth. I like how casual it comes off. Pretty good, though I'd definitely think about utilizing stanzas to better organize each thought.