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on A Girl Digging by j-ay rose, on August 23, 2005I think the spacing definitely made it easier to read.
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on A Girl Digging by j-ay rose, on August 20, 2005
it has...dare I say it...potential?
I think what this most lacks is a healthy dose of white space.the idea of verses is easiest but a lot of people don’t like to verse their poems. In the end it doesn’t really matter what you do, as long as you give the eye some structure and room to move about.
My policy has always been, “write as you want to be read” Read your poem aloud to yourself, put some space where you tend to stop or pause when you’re reading it. That way, people will stop or pause in the same places.
Other than that, the site is putting stupid symbols into your poetry, I know that’s not your fault but if you can figure out what’s causing it and adjust your poem so they don’t appear, it’d be a good idea.
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