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Ladie Lee

All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling - Oscar Wilde

  • Last seen on Dec 4 9:41 PM 2008. Member since August 6, 2005.
  • I am a 20 year old woman from Georgia (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm A horrible warning.
  • I have 22 comments, 1 column, 5 archived poems

My Poetry

  • Vetch
    Can you not even understand that / i might feel so? / Or stretch your taught imagination, / and conceive, my angry nature, / and believe th
    77 words, 4 comments, April 1, 2008. In Personal, Idea, Society
  • La Fille
    Spread yourself beneath the tree / and wait- / There is a certain continuity / in this posture, this splayed / and marked passivity. / - /
    74 words, 4 comments, March 16, 2008. In Ideas, Emergences
  • Dark Hour Thoughts of Callahan and Eleanor
    by destruction only can we
    save another-
    187 words, 2 comments, March 6, 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Society

My other items

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  • Draft at allpoetry
    Morning came down heavy
    Low clouds
  • Column: Curiosity and Confusion at sharepoetry
    I'm sure this could be a lively discussion if everyone would have a look, please, come in, throw me to the ropes, kick my ideas in the stomach. If I'm broken in the process, well, the devil's cure to me.
  • Dark Hour Thoughts of Callahan and Eleanor at allpoetry
    If you could find the figure- the other artist to draw you,

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  • on Return to Cliff Cottage by riveralex, on October 4, 2008
    Enjoyed this overall, some really interesting images and concepts flowing throughout.

    I am undecided on my feelings toward the stylistic shifts, (ie how you changed format and rhythm every two stanzas) I like it on one hand, it breaks the poem up and the like stanza are also the ones that are topically similar. On the other hand because this was relativly short its a trifle jarring.

    The first two stanzas had the neatest, tightest feeling, and I enjoyed the meter of them. Also i particularly liked the partial/slant rhymes. Very nice

    Also, two lines that made me stop and think "what?" were: "but friends open doors" and "as is love" they seem like fragments accidnetally left over from discarded ideas. It may just be that I'm missing certain nuances of the poem (I am very tired) but they do strike me as out of place tonally.

    Liked it very much on the whole. Anything about the ocean catches my interest. Beautiful image

    . Rewarded 8

  • on untitled by , on May 3, 2008
    holy crap why would someone even try this? i mean, really if ur gonna plagerize do something a little less well known :-P