Lake Absence at Share Poetry

Goodbye, Sharepoetry. You've been nothing but good to me.

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Kira Black on December 18, 2008

Beautful page.
Blessed Be
~Starla~
Fastlane2121 : Hello Lake! on November 3, 2008

What's up girl? Just stopped by to say hello!
skipeople : O.O I think I love you on October 26, 2008

O.O I think the title says it all

Ashley
courage is hope : Love your page! on October 13, 2008

Love your background!!

Ha ha that was random, but I was bored.

Please post more poems!
Hope

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on " Dad " by bigcoolyo, on December 22, 2008

I agree with rhetorica.
If you want to use words that aren't in your typical vocabulary, you should at least make sure they are spelled correctly. The Add Poem feature contains a spellcheck, although I find Microsoft Word's spell check is better, and then of course you can always check yourself. =] I think the poem would actually have a better effect on the reader if you don't try to use the more complex words and use simpler words...It'll add a sense of innocence that would be appropriate with your content.
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on Silence by bigcoolyo, on December 22, 2008

Some families are dysfuctional, but I'm always here!
This has some serious potential, but it needs a little editing..Smooth out the edges, you know? Anyways, I hope you don't mind, but I've made some changes that I think will really help your poem.

A feeling
always comes to me
a feeling of
ever-lasting thought

I don't quite
understand life
But my soul keeps saying,
"It's better to be silent..."

Sometimes, this soul
is right
I agree
I disagree

I don't know why
but 'ilence is ab
Everlasting Breath

You might not
understand me
You might not even
notice me-
But I want to be alone

When I'm going
to die

For everyone,
they'll feel like it
Never happened..

Hope I didn't impose...Well, I know I did, but I hope you don't mind! Feel free to completely ignore this. =]