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Suggested Poetry Books:
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Please review my poems as well!
I try my best to earn
A gold membership free
By commenting and reviewing
On other people's poems.
I try my best to help
Others with their
Poetic Endeavor
And shower them with
Good advice that I can give
Even though I'm only fourteen.
Suggested Poetry Books:
How to Write Poetry by Paul Janeczko, Scholastic Books
More to come!
I currently have:
8 Rewards!
- Member since March 3, 2006.
- I am a 14 year old guy (Philippines)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Webmaster, Editor-in-Chief, & Photographer.
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- I have 59 comments, 17 archived poems, 1 poem
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on The Webwork Syndrome by Terry-too, on December 9, 2006
Definitely!
This poem is wonderful! It's a piece with perfect rhythm and timing. The rhymes don't sound forced. That's why it's good. Keep it up!
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
GREAT!
Amazing! Yup Dave Ochs's poems do rock. He gave me good advice and I'm glad he helped you too.